Paper 2

This revision is mostly made up of “quality of life” improvements centered around the number of quotes in my final draft. Though I also considered implementing a more informal writing style in this revision, I eventually decided that I prefer formal writing for this paper. I’ve never used informal language in an official paper before, and I don’t want the first time I do to be in writing about a subject that too many people regard far too flippantly. Informal writing doesn’t equal flippancy, of course, but I feel more able to achieve the tone I wanted to using formal writing.